Wolfs Bane (1/1)

Title: 6/10The title is short, so taht's good. But I think it's a bit inconsiderate in a way because what if some poeple doesn't know what Bane means? I did a survey and about half of my friends in my school doesn't really know what Bane means. Appearance: 2/5To be honest, I think the poster is rather plain and the title can't be seen. Well, it was hard for me to spot it. It clashes with the background Foreword & Description: 10/10It was very interesting it made me want to read your story so two thumbs up. Spelling/Grammar: 10/10Your grammar was spot on. and your vocabulary, it's just divine. Plot: 19/20i loved the plot. Characters: 14/15The characters were described very well, I'm impressed, but there were very little descriptions about their appearance. Flow: 8/10 I can't say much about the flow since you only have three chapters. Writing Style: 10/10I loved the writing style throughout the entire story. Enjoyment: 9/10One of the greatest thing I have read. Total: 88/100