Another Heart by Seunghyu (1/1)
Title: 7/10Title is good, it doesn't just tell you what the story would be like. It catches the reader's attention. However, I think it's a bit too common. Appearance: 4/5Poster is good and I like the dark colors however the Siwon part didn't look ike it matches with the poster. I like how you typed in the paragraphs short and it doesn't give the impression of "ugh, the story's really long." Foreword & Description: 10/10I love the description! Catches my attention of how the story will go! The question "Another heart for Suho; is that possible?" works really well for a description. :) Spelling/Grammar: 8/10There were some grammar mistakes and spelling as in you skipped a letter. Your vocabulary's really strong. Plot: 19/20Assdfghpwrixssfkldz. The plot is incredible. Loved it to the max. ;~; Characters: 15/15You described the characters really well and their distinct personality. Like how Siwon cares a lot for Suho. Good job! And I never expected a story between Siwon and Suho especially as siblings. Flow: 9/10 The flow at the first part was a bit too slow. But the second part was smooth. Writing Style: 10/10I love the way you write. You described all the emotions really well, sad especially. Enjoyment: 10/10Tragic story and not boring at all. I read and urgh, it was painful to see Suho go. You did such a great job in writing the whole thing and you're an amazing author! Oh and by the way, I think you should do a sequel. Would be awesome. I am not the person who gets emotional easily but you deserved my tears.This story was WORTH READING and you also deserve a high score from me. Well done!! ^^ Total: 92/100
Reviewed by dearseoul This was reviewed based on my point of view.Thank you for requesting. :)