Ravens Gate (1/1)

Title: 10/10The title is short and nice, I really like it. Appearance: 5/5I love everything, too speechless. Foreword & Description: 7/10The foreword doesn't give out much, it's a bit too short but it's still good. But, I think you should work on the format Spelling/Grammar: 8/10A few slips here and there, but still acceptable Plot: 18/20The plot is unique, i can tell you that but it's a bit off too. Characters: 13/15The characters were unique but I sort of dislike the fact, well that's how I portray Luhan in your storyas girly -ish? It's okay but a little bit awkward. Flow: 9/10 The flow is quite good^^ Writing Style: 10/10I loved the writing style, it was great. Enjoyment: 9/10I enjoyed it since it has my favourite ship Total: 89/100

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Reviewed by summerskyeWell, the strictness level you requested for is 4 so...this is what I think with that strictness level