☑ obessesion (1/1)

[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for obessesion[/CONTENTID1][CONTENTID2]This Isn't Your Average Cinderella Story[/CONTENTID2][CONTENTID3]Story Title: This Isn't Your Average Cinderella StoryAuthor: obessesionMain Characters: IU/Lee Jieun, Suzy/ Bae Suji, Kris/ Wu Yi Fan, Kai/ Kim Jongin, Kim Jonghyun, Oh Sehun, Kim TaehyungGenre: Drama, Friendship, RomanceStatus: On-goingDescription of Story: Your typical Cinderella story with a modern twist. (Then again, aren't they all like that?) Revolving around Jieun, the story takes place in Seoul with a (fake) entertainment company, JRTent. Her step-sisters are Suzy and Tiffany from the (made-up) group of TALK4.   CRITIQUE:Story Title: 4/5Unique by way too simple and plain title, but too long for my liking. You could’ve used something shorter, but still contain the same idea, like “Not Your Average Cinderella” or “She Is Not Your Average Cinderella” or “The Modern Cinderella”. These are, of course, just my ideas. However, the title is relevant to the story so thumbs up for that.  Graphics: 8/10Cute. But the poster looks.. too crowded? It would’ve been better if you just kept the most important characters on it. And I don’t understand the reason for making all the other characters (except Jieun) black&white? I understand that the spotlight should be on her but it bring a sad feeling to it. Description and Foreword: 9/10Good description. You summed up everything and gave little details. You have a couple of mistakes which I’m going to post here: “ The company that is contracted with TALK4 […]” – “The comp