ArchiveARCHIVE정신 분석  HOMEBETAFAMESHAMEARCHIVES hello people! this page contains the compilation of reviews from the shop. its quite a lot, so you might have a bit of a trouble on searching for yours or for others. despite that, please do pm me if you want to get a copy of your review.  ABOUT US  heLLO, GUYS! YEOLWHO05, THE SOLE FOUNDER OF MENTAL BREAKDOWN REVIEWS, SPEAKING HERE. FIRST OF ALL, THANK YOU FOR VISITING us. ITS REALLY OVERWHELMING TO SEE YOUR INTEREST FOR THIS REVIEW SHOP, AS SIMPLE AS IT MIGHT BE. NEVERTHELESS, ILL START OF WITH A SHORT INTRODUCTION. HERE IN MENTAL BREAKDOWN REVIEWS, WE DO OUR BEST TO OFFER THE BEST SERVICE THERE IS, BE IT IN REVIEWS or IN BETA-READING SERVICES.past reviews shall be posted on this thread. note that plagiarizers will be reported as soon as possible. we have had issues like this one before, although we did not resort into reporting it as we made amends. still, please do avoid on plagiarizing our work as we had worked hard for them, and if you happen to notice plagiarizers, although it is hard to do so, please notify us. plagiarizers not only exist on stories, but to reviews as well, and its really heart-breaking that people do that. RULES & GUIDELINES  001. you must be subscribed to view the reviews. however, do not subscribe to copy or plagiarize the reviews posted on this thread. we have worked hard for them, so the least that we would want is for you to plagiarize our hard work.002. UPVOTING IS EXTREMELY OPTIONAL, THOUGH WE WOULD REALLY LOVE it IF YOU DO. hopefully, this shop gets featured in the future.003. REMEMBER TO PLACE A COMMENT your opinion, or if you want a copy of your review, perhaps. you can also pm yeolwho05 and she will gladly assist your needs / inquiries.004. ABSOLUTELY NO BAshING, OKAY? LEARN TO HAVE RESPECT. we are all humans here, except if youre an alien or something, and we all make mistakes, so please dont be so judgmental of others, especially to the reviewers. if youre an author, please dont expect so much, of youll eventually be disappointed. well do our best though.005. DO NOT RUSH US. WE ALSO HAVE LIVES OUtsidE OF ASIANFANFICS, YOU KNOW.006. CREDITING IS EXTREMELY MANDATORY. MAKE SURE TO PROPERLY CREDIT US. IT WOULD BE LIKE A WAY FOR YOU TO THANK US FOR OUR FREE SERVICE. EITHER USE THE SHOPS BANNER, OR YOU COULD SIMPLY PUT A LINK IN YOUR FOREWORD, REDIRECTING IT TO OUR SHOPS MAIN PAGE.do not hesitate and ask if you have any more questions, especially for those who cannot view these rules and guidelines. thank you!FAQS  questions for requesting on the shop.please visit the shop if interested. thanks.Q:.CAN I REQUEST AGAIN AFTER MY INITIAL REQUEST IS FINISHED?A: OF COURSE YOU CAN, AS LONG AS THE SHOP IS OPEN AND ACCEPTING, YOU CAN.q: WHAT DO I DO IF MY REQUEST IS TAKING SO LONG?A: IF YOU ARE REALLY IN A RUSH, PLEASE DO INFORM US "NICELY." THERES NO NEED TO BASH AND RUSH US QUITE NEGATIVELY. JUST TELL US NICELY, OF BETTER YET, PRIVATELY MESSAGE YEOLWHO05, AND SHE WILL TALK TO THE REVIEWER. LET US REMIND YOU THAT IT IS QUITE HARD ON OUR PART AS WELL, AS WE ALSO HAVE OUR PRIVATE LIVES too.q: wHAT DO I DO IF IM NOT SATISFIED WITH MY REVIEW?A: WELL, THATS A HARD QUESTION. OF COURSE, YOU CAN REQUEST FOR THE SAME STORY, WITH A DIFFERENT REVIEWER, BUT THEN AGAIN, IT WOULD BE BEST TO TALK TO THE REVIEWER FIRST, BECAUSE HE/SHE MIGHTVE ONLY FORGOTTEN A FEW THINGS, YOU KNOW? PLUS, SOME REVIEWERS LIKE THEIR CRITIQUES SHORT.Q: can i ask for a review only concerning positive things about my story?a: thats complete up to you, and to what the reviewer deems right. however, we cannot promise anything. reviews are not meant to be only positive. theres no such thing as a perfect story. all stories has its flaws. expect your reviews to contain both positive and negative elements.q: im not comfortable with the rubric.a: then i guess you can choose which section you want to get reviewed. if you really dont like the rubric, then i suggest that you go and request on another shop since we really cant do anything about it, much less make a rubric for you. OUR RUBRIC  taKE NOTE THAT TO BE FEATURED, YOUR STORY MUST BE REVIEWED WITH THE WHOLE RUBRIC. ANYWAY, WE WILL BE GRADING YOUR STORIES WITH THIS RUBRIC:- STORY TITLE (5/5)- APPEARANCE (10/10)      POSTER AND BACKGROUND. 5/5      LAY-OUT AND FORMATTING. 5/5- DESCRIPTION AND FOREWORD (10/10)- CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (15/15)      UNITY OF THE CHARACTERS AND THEIR ACTIONS. 5/5      EVOLUTION OF THE CHARACTERS. 5/5      POINT OF VIEW USED. 5/5- PLOT (35/35)      ORIGINALITY. 5/5      SETTING OF THE STORY. 5/5      THEME OF THE STORY. 5/5      FLOW AND CONSISTENCY OF EVENTS. 10/10      CONFLICTS AND RESOLUTIONS. 10/10- GRAMMAR AND WRITING STYLE (20/20      CHOICE OF WORDS AND USE OF LANGUAGE. 5/5      GRAMMARTICAL ERRORS. 5/5      WRITING STYLE. 5/5- OVER-ALL ENJOYMENT (5/5)TOTAL GRADE: 100/100 = 100% AFFILIATES  EFFICACIOUSAFFILIATESAFFILIATESAFFILIATESAFFILIATESAFFILIATESAFFILIATESAFFILIATESAFFILIATESYEOLWHO05CHUBBYFACEDIVA-sweetbabymia-BAEKBAEK_XOXOMOELOLZCCGTEEHEESTEPHLVESKCULTURESIGNUPB#TCHGOTTALOVEDABOYSbaoshiKITSUNEMITSUNEQUINACAPANErai_moore--masquerade---- CODED BY LIZRYANDESIGNED BY ALERICmc ForewordCREDIT US WITH THIS BANNER:GRAPHICS DESIGNED BY SEDBAU OF TYPE AB GRAPHIC SHOP.COMMENT BELOW TO BE AFFILIATES!