Dance Off: Final Round & (1/1)

*Hiya there! Okay, I can honestly say this was the most annoying chapter to write bc I’m using my dad’s laptop while my real Unnie is using mine up in NYC until her laptop gets fixed. Dad’s laptop kept going back a page every time I touched the mouse. So basically, it keeps deleting this chapter every time I get to the good part! I’ve prolly wrote this chapter over 4 times already!! ~~sigh~~ Anyways, Writer’s Block is here so this chapter might not be as great. School is in 1 day (Tuesday, August 31, 2010). Wish me luck!much love XOXO*Haylie surprised me when she asked me to play Promiscuous by Nelly Furtado. That was the dance she gave up on a year and a half ago. She always thought it’d never be good enough no matter what she did.To add on the stress and disappointment, her boyfriend of 3 years had told her she looked like an idiot doing the dance. Afterwards, Robby left Haylie for the new girl in Haylie’s old dance team. That disgusting Thing insisted on showing off her chunky thighs and bulging stomach. Also, she always has to be different than the rest of the group. She called it her “Solo”. Well, her “Solo” lost Haylie’s Dance Team’s chances of going Statewide and more!Today, Haylie’s dance was PERFECT! In the end, she started to break-dance. It wasn’t just flips and footwork, but she did hardcore floorwork where she is doing the spins and things like that. She hit every move on the nose!Leeteuk was walking through the door with wide eyes on Haylie. She was still spinning around and kicking. She finally finished with a jump in the air! Everyone clapped and cheered. You could hear things like “YAY MINGJAE” or “WHOA JAE” and “GOOD JOB”. She laughed at us and high fived everyone. I got in my place for my surprise dance.~Haylie POV~I went to go get my bottle of water and I didn’t even notice he was behind me until he praised, “You were really good. I’m happy I was here on time.” I jumped at the sudden voice and laughed to see it was Leeteuk. “Do you really think I was good?” He said, “From what I saw, you were flawless!” My cheeks heated up and I tried to hide by pretending to wipe the sweat off my face.Right then, I heard a familiar famous song. I ran to see my sister do her Thriller dance. The song was mixed and edited by our friend. It was much shorter than the real song. Michael Jackson was an Idol and inspiration of ours. I didn’t actually think she’d do the dance. When we heard of his death, we were just like millions of other people: morning. But we had a MJ Parody in school and Kaylie had come up with this dance all by herself.Being Kaylie, she included tutting into her performance. She loved to show off her tutting skills. No one else I knew was as good as she was. Her angles were always perfect, her timing was on the spot, and her love for it was never ending.Eunhyuk had done a regular hip hop routine. (Same dance in the video I showed last time, but not the mask or slow motion part) It wasn’t that special, however it was really cool.The group, excluding Eunhyuk, Kaylie, and I, gathered to share their scores. We waited for what seemed like forever, until they all yelled at the same time, “MINGHAE AND MINGJAE ARE TIED FOR FIRST!” I screamed under my breath and went with Kaylie to be good sports o Eunhyuk and say it was a good battle and that he was a great opponent, which he was!Kaylie turned to the guys and said, “How did me and Mingjae tie?” She turned to me quickly saying, “No offense!” I shook my head like it was nothing because I was wondering the same thing.Shindong replied, “Everyone agreed that both you and your brother couldn’t beat each other. You were on the same level in dancing. So we just said you both got perfect scores!” I whispered, “That’s kind of cheating...” Eunhyuk patted my back and said, “Its okay, you were much better than me. TODAY. With more practices, I will be in first place!” I laughed and me and Kaylie bowed saying, “Kamsahabnida!” Siwon said, “No need to be formal! We’re all friends!”------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Haylie's Dance -  www.youtube.com/watch?v=HH0Su8xgtcA&feature=channel Kaylie's Dance -  www.youtube.com/watch?v=HS44Kf25AO8&feature=related