Im Not Moving by Isadora (1/1)
I'm Not MovingAuthor: Isadora_QuagmirePairing: Onew/KeyRating: GLength: 5 faily long chapters.Summary: Key won't give up on Jinki, no matter how long it takes. Exie says: This is the story that won my Only Onew contest, and I promised her a long time ago that I would feature it here. I'm sorry, sweetheart! It's taken me far too long. Anyway, the contest was full of excellent entries, so for this one to win, I found it really wonderful. The way she uses language is absolutely beautiful. You can picture everything that's happening in the story, and I have to say I teared up a little, which doesn't happen to me at all ever. The flashback-present day format really works in this story, because you see what was, and what is. It deepens the emotions in the story, and I really enjoyed that. And also, although I know comas are sometimes overused, it's because many authors (including myself) often have no clue what they're talking about. But Isadora_Quagmire obviously did her research and I'm sure if I talked to her in person, she could easily convince me that she's a neurologist. I particularly liked the passage about the reason Onew chose to sing opera. I find myself thinking about that passage even when I don't actively register what story I'm thinking about. It was a really wonderful story and I am so honored that a story like this won my contest.