Attack on Titan Review (1/1)

Attack On Titan Re-Review  100 Reason Why I Love You

Reviewer: ihavefreetime Title (1/5):

THE TITLE IS THE SAME AS BEFORE XD (I've seen that title twice before so it isn't anything unique and eye catching. And the title just tells everyone what the fic is going to be about. The only thing we don't know is who has the 100 reasons). Graphics/Appearance (4/5):

It's still the same as before so same points! Description/Foreword (8/15):

I think there's something different about the description because it seems more romantic and it's less obvious than the fic being simply about 100 reasons. It's improved! Characterization (10/20):

There still isn't much characterisation because we all know how madly in love Kris is with Chanyeol, but you can see why in detail Kris would love Chanyeol, so it's better. You've shown how Chanyeol has one Kris's heart. Grammar (15/15):

The grammar is fine again. Plot/Originality (15/30):

It's still not that original, but since you've improved on it and added scenarios where the reasons have happened, it makes it different from the other fics similar. Flow (5/5):

It still all connects. Overall Enjoyment (3/5):

I enjoyed it more now that it has more detail. It makes it more enjoyable and I can imagine the scenarios in my head now^^ Total= 61/100