Everybody has made mistakes, some more than others. Ive made one and thats why Im in this situation. ForewordA one shot starring Junhyung, Yoseob and a fictional character.POSTER by: Me.No plagiarizing pls. comment please~ REVIEWS:BY:Woojyo  Review for: Mistake (http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/102758/1/mistake-angst-junhyung-korean-oneshot-tragedy-yoseob)Mistake is a sad love story. it tells us a story of a girl who struggle her life to be honest and not to hurt ones who she loved very much. instead of being winding around, the writer successfully tells the story straight to the point of the conflinct. the language is very enjoyable and easy to understand. I personally recommend this oneshot to be read. the climax and the ending was just perfect for a sad ending story. well, if you are looking for a sad oneshot story, youll probably like this story. as the writer puts the conflict starting from the beginning of the story, it spiced up the eager and curiosity to read the story.. so, please do subscribe, read and comment to this story. BY: -Elysia- Language (Tenses, grammer and mumbo jumbo) - 5 / 5 PERFECT! KEEP IT UP!Neatness (NEATNESS IS KEY, Kim Ki Bum of SHINee) - 9 / 10 ALMOST PERFECT! But using this *-.-.-* is kind of... aha. Its just me i think, but maybe use ------------- next time? Haha. Love the readable font~ :DStoryline ( Potholes? Character mess ups? Stuck to Genre? ) - 23 / 25 “Yoseob oppa, thank you for being with me through this period.” I told him. <- This sentence was abit unclear though. Where was he? :O And he didnt say or feel anything towards her dying? D: Haha, hwaiting! Maybe adding something about Yoseob promising not to tell Junhyung anything? Or something like that would make the story more.. heartbreaking? :D Cliche ( Any twists? ) - 5 / 5 I HAVE TO GIVE IT TO YOU! It completely shocked me yknow. :D GOOD ONE.Extra ( MOHOHOHO ) - 4 / 5 For completely surprising me~ And for your hard work of making your own poster~ :D BTW, you can try making your foreword look nicer?Poster ( Relevant? ) - 8 / 10 Yoseob wasnt very... important haha. :P So maybe you could have given him a small photo? :D TOTAL -> 54 / 60 QUITE GOOD! HWAITING IN YOUR FUTURE STORIES! :D