Okay, first time doing this but wth right? xD So are you people tired of reading crappy stories? The same old boring cliche plots? The dramatic and over-excessive Mary Sue characters? The typical good girl heoine falls for the jerky bad boy main character? The lack of potential subscribers and commentors that you think would definitely fall in love for your story? Well fear not my fellow netizens! Since *drum-rolls* Badda-bing! Badda-boom! OSM story Reviews && Recommendation Corner is now here and open! *cheers* Thus if you want truthful, practical reviews and even perhaps helpful advices on you fanfics? Or just mainly HONEST opinions on the progressive work of each chapter in your story. Reviews that actually makes sense and tells you the flaws of your story and even suggest you some ways to attract readers. The type of reviewer that isnt afraid to DIRECTLY tell you with a straight face that your story looks like crap with a capital C. And if you are the type of author that wants a harsh reviewer then this review corner is just for you! Yay!   Foreword #o1. Strictly NO trolling or bashing. Or you are automatically placed in or lil o Black List. >xD #o2. Apply or request through the comment box. And subscribe! Though were not forcing you to do so, but we would be glad if you do. :D #o3. No naggy, impatient people! We DO have a life aside from being online in AFF. [okay we dont, were just lazy bums xD] #o4. We would like to be credited as reviewers in your story. Just a simple reviewed by: 13itt3rsw33t && no0nespeciaL_xD and a thank you would be highly appreciated, its common decency to thank someone right? #o5. Reviews would be done by chapters [or so, it depends on how the story progresses or on its updates] and we would inform you in your walls when its done. #o6. NO YURI! Yaoi and rated scenes are good, but no YURI! D:<      *E - 39% below - Crappy story, didnt even bother reading any further, the plot is predictable, the way you write gave me a head ache, I was trying to decode the sentences you are trying to portray, the story is boring, and lastly WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU EVEN TRYING TO WRITE?! D:< [But I doubt someone would get this grade xD] *D - 40% - 55% - It was uh-kay. . .Not too good, not too bad, just in between. It needs A LOT of improvements here and there. It lacks uniqueness and perhaps orderliness, several aspects and theres still a lot of typos. It made me want to cry in boredom while reading it. =/ *C - 56% - 69% - Its fine, but still lacking. Not so much typos, but still needs some improvement. Better reread you story to notice the little flaws on it. But at least it was a decent read. :] *B - 70% - 85% - FINALLY! A story I totally enjoyed reading! It was fun! Had me squealing and laughing like a complete retard or perhaps crying? Depends on the genre. Good work! And keep on writing! It was really interesting and would like to read more about it.:D *A - 86% - 100% - Dude.You.Are.OSM! Your story is magnifique!!! It had me hook up, and got me addicted to it. You know the right ways to make your readers crave for more! But seriously, you are just OSM. Enough said. xDDD     * Opening * Title- /5   - Whether your title attracts readers, not typical, makes sense, relates to the story Poster+Background- /5   - Is it pretty? Matches the story theme? Description && Foreword- /10 - Did it make sense? Can it connect to the readers interest? Does it explain the story? Did it give a little introduction and insight to the story? Total: /20 * Contents * Originality && OSM-ness- /10 - The originality, uniqueness, creativity. Whether its no typical. Plot- /15 - Is it interesting? Are the scenes in the story alright? Did it made the readers want more? Is it cute and lovable? Was the rated scenes written well? [if there are any] Chapter Titles- /5 - Has a relation to the chapter, which spikes the readers interest in wanting to know what it meant. Flow- /15 - Did it flows perfectly? The progress is not so fast and doesnt jump from one scene to another that confuses readers. Wasnt rushed, and is clear and easy to understand. Total: /45 * Expressions * Characterization -/15 - Was the characters portrayed well, as they were described as such? Like their personalities and their role in the story? Way of writing- /10 - Clear and easy to understand that it doesnt need to be decoded to make it understandable. It doesnt give readers a hard time to read and doesnt cause potential head aches upon attempting to read the story. Mechanics [Grammar && Spelling && etc]- /10 - Correct spelling, terms being used, past/present tense, grammar and punctuations and just correct everything. Total: /35 Total Score: /100 Bonus- /15 - Because we are good people. xD But it depends whether you are worthy enough to be given as such. xDDD    AFF username:  AFF profile url: Story Title: Story URL: Genre: Chapter Length: Main Characters && Pairings: Rating: in here is it rated H or not or whatever or how you rate your story Extra: what you want to include that is related to your story or such Reviewer: [choose between the two no0nespeciaL_xD or 13itt3rsw33t] eBiiiL reviewer: no0nespeciaL_xD likes: comedy/humor, yaoi, rated, random, oneshots/multi-shots, anything interestingdislikes: angst [long-chapters], cliche stuff, boring, light colored fonts that blinds the eyes not so eBiiiL reviewer: 13itt3rsw33t likes: one shots / multi chaps, romance, comedy / humor, adventure, fantasy, friendship, tragedy, yaoi,  [general], interesting and catchy storiesdislikes: long chapters that does seem to be lost in the middle of it, too much drama, boring...  REQUEST WAITING LIST13itt3rsw33t - cutterpillow- LeeKyuri- jungminian0403- TofuBlings- SKID_11- susanyuenkim- AlexaSujuFan   * H A I T U S * no0nespeciaL_xD- aznchika   06-25-2011 Guys, 13itt3rsw33t here. I really am asking for your patience and such especially to the ones whose stories would liked to be reviewed that I have been unable to give you your desired reviews ASAP. The thing is that we just started our classes and we had a hell lot of things to read that your stories are being overtaken in priorites. I have to read 8 cases = 80 pages long bondpaper and we dont know which of them is gonna be used by our teacher in his lesson. So anyways... I wont ne saying that I really am in H A I T U S or such since I am always finding time in updating my reviews: for TofuBlings and SKID_11, they are nearly done and so yeah, I might update those reviews these days...Hope you wont give up on me and on this review site. Hope you understand guys ^^,love lots,13itt3rsw33t  o7-o5-11Yo! no0nespeciaL_xD here, just want everyone to know that I would be TAKING UP REVIEW REQUEST APPs yet again since 13itt3rsw33t has been nagging me to help her out. >,< And being the good person I am, I would be complying to her request. xD LOL But anyhoo~ I would be accepting stories with ONLY less than 10 chapters maximum. Since Im a lazy person so yea, that is all. xDxoxo,no0nespeciaL_xD